this piece was lost
i will keep filling
this empty hole with emptiness
shallow feeling of loneliness
afraid not to dream
but i'm tired of nightmare
which i couldn't shake off
i'm my intoxication
that keep me high
in this narrow tunnel
the light won't shine again
let me be here
don't you bother
cause i will never
be your matter
this piece will always lost
i forge the smile
i fake the tears
i clone the heart
would you please be happy now?
04 August 2008 - 20.31
Originally posted here.
Nice.
ReplyDeleteI can never write poetry. I will go like, gah! gah! this is so cringey.
Dah lama tak login kapasitor. Active member ?
yea.. i suck too at poetry. (as long as ppl dont use it in everyday speech, i have issue in understanding them. LOL)
ReplyDeletebut lovess, big LOVE for them!
and yea, uve done a good job.
*signing as a new fan*
keep it up!
;)
dils: hahaha. you have the talent la, just need to polish it a bit. your writing is almost poetic! thanks for the compliment. a ah, am an active member. :)
ReplyDeleteraje: hehehehe. wonder if anybody not into poetry. hehehe. thanks for liking it.
me likey.
ReplyDeletecan i steal?